I am new to the site and am looking for a critique partner for my children’s book. It’s a rhyme scheme, approximately 1200 words, for a 4-6 of age audience; it’s not a heavy a read.
I am looking for all sorts of feedback! Does the rhyme flow or does it need fixing in some parts? Are some of the words to big for the 4-6 aged audience? Is the plot too confusing, or is it clear and easy to follow?
Any other input is much appreciated! Thanks for your help!