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looking for a critique partner for my children’s book!:)

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    amduran25
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    Hello everyone,

    I am new to the site and am looking for a critique partner for my children’s book. It’s a rhyme scheme, approximately 1200 words, for a 4-6 of age audience; it’s not a heavy a read.

    I am looking for all sorts of feedback! Does the rhyme flow or does it need fixing in some parts? Are some of the words to big for the 4-6 aged audience? Is the plot too confusing, or is it clear and easy to follow?

    Any other input is much appreciated! Thanks for your help!

    #5652

    mary2
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    Hey Amduran25,

    I am no critic but I have a 4 year old and can read it to her and see what she thinks?

    Cheers!
    Mary.

    #5653

    amduran25
    Participant

    Thank you! I sent you a message with the story pasted in it.

    I hope you and your daughter enjoy!

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