Hello all, I’m looking for someone to help keep me on track with my fantasy novel, likely marketed for YA. I don’t want to get into too much detail on here but most of the action is based out of Northern Newfoundland in modern times but we do jump back to an incident that happened in 1775 New York. One of the main characters is a bi-sexual 16-year-old girl and the other is other worldly but took human form around 10,000 years ago. She is essentially the mother of all magic on earth.
My background is in journalism so my writing is moderately clean (but not flawless) but I haven’t dabbled in creative writing for years. I’m looking for someone to look for continuity issues, general feedback on if the story will be palatable to my audience and any glaring errors, awkward dialogue, etc.
Happy to read someone else’s work and provide what feedback I can!
ETA: I’m hoping to write a minimum of a chapter a week and share that with someone.