Mystery romance 25000 words in. Want to know if I’m on the right track. Would be nice to have someone who can give me a ‘real-world’ view of my characters…keeping in mind that most of all, this is a romance, so some romantic ‘nonsense’ is necessary :)–likewise erotic situations/scenes. Grammer and basics not necessary, mostly content at this point. Murder/mystery is also a big part of the characters’ story, so my goal is a nice balance of characterization, sensuality and ‘who-doneit-ness’ with a bit of humor.