I’m currently writing my first novel and I’d love to have one or two people critique as I write chapters. I have included a short summary of the story below:
Jesse lives in the Philadelphia State Hospital for the Insane, more commonly known as the Byberry asylum. With schizophrenia, he must deal with the many voices in his head, especially one in particular, which he calls the Devil. After an incident left him naked, beaten, and thrown into the incontinent ward of the hospital, he realizes that this isn’t how he wants to live for the rest of his life. Jesse can save himself, or he can save the thousands of patients that suffer in Byberry.