I’m a male writing YA sci-fi romance, which means I have a male and a female protagonist. I need to get an initial overall critique on this novel by a female who reads YA and has a good feel for it. The main characters both are 18 when the story begins. I have the first draft of Book One completed, but I’m in the second draft stages now and I need feedback on the first draft to help me know what I need to change, cut or fix. The MS is nearly 600 pages, so I need to cut 100-150 pages, if possible. I don’t need line-by-line right now, only a read through with suggestions and impressions.
If you think you’d enjoy reading and critiquing this type of story, please let me know. Thanks so much.
I don’t know if you’ve found anyone to read your manuscript since it was a couple of months ago you posted your request. But I’d love to help you out. I have written several YA romances but not sci-fi. If you’d like to send me a couple of chapters to see if there’s a fit there, I’d be more than happy to read them.