Hi, I’m seeking a critique partner to help me finish my newest work, In the Bayou. This is my first attempt at mystery/thriller. I’m thinking I’d like my work to resemble the types of stories such as Allison Brennan, Wendy Corsi Staub, or Iris Johansen. I have the plot line worked out, I’m just having issues fitting the scenes together. Anyone who would like to help me structure this story, would be appreciated.
WARNING: This story does contain white supremacists, kidnappings and raping of teenage girls(no detailed scenes), and racism. FBI agents are trying to stop this group from trying to overthrow the government.