Looking for Critique Partner Listings, September 14, 2012 (& an apology)

Hi all,

Super sorry about the spamming going on yesterday. If you received a message from someone looking for love, please delete and ignore it. The user has been deleted and I am keeping a very close eye on it. Thanks for all being so swell about it!

We’re having an Indian summer here in Seattle and I couldn’t be happier. Got to get the sunshine in while we can!

Have a fab one, whatever you’re up to.

– Laura


@searthy – YOUNG ADULT


I’m looking for a critique partner for my YA urban fantasy

I’m looking for honest critiques. In return, you’ll receive the same. Interested?”


@mostcommonlastname – YOUNG ADULT


“I’m looking for a CP to help me go through my latest draft of my young adult/fantasy novel. Here’s a quick blurb:

Kevin isn’t normal. Leah knows this ever since he started following her everywhere. But his weirdness goes beyond the usual. Because, as Leah soon discovers, Kevin isn’t even human. Now, thanks to him, she’s got to deal with dragons

If you’re interested, let me know. Thanks ^_^”


@dorothy – YOUNG ADULT

“Hi! I’m Dorothy. It’s been a while since I posted here. Lol. Anyways…I am working on a new project and I REALLY could use some feedback. I’m currently in the process if my second draft, and would love if a fresh pair of eyes could look at it. Here’s my synopsis:

The last thing sixteen-year-old Tamin Moon expected to do her junior year was find a locket from the Father she never knew. A locket that would awaken a power inside of Tamin that she never knew she had. A power so great that the unearthly Dellon Society would stop at nothing to possess.

Little does Tamin know that she is destined to become the next possessor of a great power called the Heaven’s Fire. And that she is destined to join the young Dragon Riders who live to protect Imperial, a world that shouldn’t exist. Now the target of the Dellon Society, and at the center of a war, Tamin must adapt to her new life as a Dragon Rider, and as a citizen of Imperial.

But that’s hard to do when she is falling for the betrothed Blake, the leader of the Dragon Rider’s and her trainer. In a time of war a sixteen-year-old girl is the only thing that can stop the evil forces of the Dellon Society from overtaking Imperial, and raising up an army of the undead. Tamin will have to choose between the life she wants with Blake, and the duty she has to the people of Imperial.”

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